小学英语作文全攻略：写作技巧＋万能句型＋思维导图＋作文范文
小学英语作文全攻略：写作技巧＋万能句型＋思维导图＋作文范文
小学英语作文如何才能得高分？如何让作文内容更有条理、更有逻辑？如何让普通句子变得更加生动形象？本文将为你提供全面的写作技巧，包括5W1H分析法、万能句型、思维导图应用等，帮助你轻松掌握英语作文的写作要领。
了解作文评分标准
大部分学生在英语作文中得分集中在第二档（4-5分）或第三档（6-8分），如何突破至第四档（9-10分）呢？关键在于提升文章的条理性和逻辑性。
英语写作的核心：5W1H
英语写作和语文写作一样，核心在于5W1H：
- Who：人物
- When：时间
- Where：地点
- What：事件
- Why：原因
- How：方式
以一篇描述周末活动的作文为例：
- Who：I（me, my, mine）
- When：last Sunday
- Where：room, home, lake, countryside, cinema
- What：cleaning, washing, boating, sightseeing, watching
- Why：需要学生自己填充
- How：学生自己填充
如何让句子更生动
高分作文不仅需要清晰的逻辑，还需要“赏心悦目”的用词。例如：
- 形容快乐：happy → have fun / satisfied
- “谢谢您的款待”：It was very delicious. Thank you. → It was a wonderful dinner.
标点符号的使用
英语中没有顿号，分割并列成分用逗号。例如：
- She is beautiful, charming and wise.
- 正确的英文日期格式：13 August, 2002
小学英语写作常用重点万能句型
问候语
- Nice to meet you!
- Hello!
- How are you?
- I am fine, thanks.
询问姓名
- What is your/his/her name?
- My/his/her name is Jenny.
询问颜色
- What colour is it?
- What is your favourite colour?
- It is red.
- My favourite colour is blue.
询问地点
- Where is my book?
- There it is!
询问数量
- How many pens do you have?
- Four.
询问感觉
- How do you feel?
- I am happy!
询问事物
- What is this?
- It is a book.
询问事情
- What is the matter?
- I cut my knee.
- What are they doing?
- They are playing.
询问年龄
- How old are you?
- I am ten years old.
请求
- May I have two books, please?
- Sure!
小学英语写作重点句型短语
短语
- that little girl：那个小女孩
- (be) so short：如此矮
- (be) so cute：如此可爱
- (be) very naughty：非常淘气
- a little chick：一只小鸡
- two big red hens：两只大红母鸡
句型
- Who are they, Lingling? They are my grandparents.
- They are my grandparents. They were young, then.
- I was two, then.
- But your hair was so short.
- She was fat. Now she's thin.
- Were they old then? No, they weren't. They were young.
英语写作思维导图
一提到写英语作文，很多同学都无从下笔，总是“信手写来”，没有规划。这样做的后果是，作文篇章结构不清晰，内容选择可能会脱离主题，从而影响作文的总体得分。小英为了帮助大家解决这一难题，带来了英语写作思维导图，让你以后作文提笔前胸有成竹，次次稳拿满分！
写作时需考虑的因素
- 本话题所需要的词块、语块。
- 本话题的写作模板结构等。
- 本话题所涉及到的经典名句、谚语等。
困惑与对策
困惑1：写什么？
以《How to learn well?》为题，写一篇作文，那么我们应该如何入手开始写作呢？来看看以下几张思维导图，能够帮你整理好一篇作文的写作框架。
困惑2：如何选材？
即使知道了写作框架，但在补充框架时又会遇到另一个困惑：如何选材？以下是一些关于写作选材的建议：
1.选定英语思维导图各区域所需的词块和语块。
2.将各区域的词块和语块按段落写成连贯的语篇。
3.对照思维导图自我批改，注意人称、时态语态、句型结构的正确使用。
困惑3：如何表达？
很多学生在写作时，使用的句式比较单一，因此文章大多雷同，缺乏个性。 针对这些问题，我们可以从以下几个方面改进：
1.对相同意思，注意不同句式的表达法，选择更好的句式。
2.短文写作，表达力求精悍、生动、丰富，避免重复用一样的句式。
3.特别注意使用承上启下的词语和句子。
思维导图在英语作文写作中的应用实例
写作流程：
1.审题、理清思路：考虑写什么（挑选关键词，搭建作文框架）。
2.选择词语：根据话题和作文框架选用所需要的语料（词块和语块）。
3.遣词造句：根据思维导图中的语料，用合适的句型写作。
4.语篇定稿：根据思维导图修改润色作文——紧扣主题、表达准确，关联自然，语篇流畅。
实例1：
假如你有两位同学——芳芳和明明，参加了上星期二学校组织的英语演讲比赛，他们的不同表现使你深有感触。请你根据下列表各中的内容提示写一篇英语短文。
芳芳
明明
我
1.认为自己英语好，不需要努力；花费时间挑选比赛用的漂亮衣服
2.因准备不足，太紧张，而没有完成演讲。
1.努力学习，向别人请教；赛前两天腿受伤，但不放弃
2.在比赛中表现良好
应该向明明学习
参考词汇：英语演讲比赛 English Speech Contest
要求：
- 词数：80~100个
- 短文开头已给出，不计入总词数
- 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥
Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did make me think deeply.
Before the contest, Fangfang thought__________________.
范文1
Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did make me think deeply.
Before the contest, Fangfang thought her English was the best. So she spent lots of time picking some beautiful clothes for herself instead of trying to work hard at English for the contest. As a result, she didn't do well in the contest because she hadn't got ready for the contest.
But Mingming was different from Fangfang. He worked hard at English and asked others for help. Especially, his leg was hurt two days before the contest, but he never gave up. In the end, he won the contest.
No doubt, from Mingming we should learn : No pains, No gains. From now on, I mush learn from Mingming.
范文2
Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did make me think deeply.
Before the contest, Fangfang thought she was good at English, and that she didn't need to spend more time on the contest at all. She always considered picking some beautiful clothes for the contest. But Mingming was different. He worked hard at English and asked others for help. Though he had hurt his leg two days before the contest, he never gave up.
In the end, Fangfang didn't get ready well enough. At the contest, she was so nervous that she she failed. But Mingming won because of his efforts.
In my opinion, we should learn from Mingming: Work hard and make progress every day.
实例2：
生活是丰富多彩的，没有爱好的人生是不完整的人生。亲爱的同学，在生活中，你有什么兴趣爱好吗？这个兴趣爱好是怎样培养起来的？它给你的生活增添了哪些色彩？请你以 “My Hobby”为题，结合自己的亲身经历写一篇短文。（词数80个左右）
要求：
1.语句通顺，合乎逻辑，书写规范。
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。
范文1
Reading is my hobby. When I was seven years old, one day, I read a comic book about how a girl beat a wolf. I was moved deeply by the girl. From then on I became interested in reading books.
Reading can not only kill the time, but also, more importantly, help improve my skills. And books can teach me how to be a good person. Books can also solve many problems for me.
In a word, reading books can make my life colorful. I will read more good books to improve myself in the future.
范文2
My favourite hobby is watching movies in the cinema. Three years ago, while I was watching the adventure 3D film Avatar in the cinema, I was attracted by the beautiful sights. It was so creative that it made me enjoy a lot. From then on, I became a movie fan.
Now, when I am tired, I go to the cinema. When I am happy, I go to the cinema, too. On the one hand, movies can make me relaxed. On the other hand, I can learn lots of knowledge from movies.